PMD Mission 3 pg 1

BAAAAAAAAAAAAH
This is taking too long. I have hardly anything done... bleh

Bassy is a bad influence


Anyway, I would however like a critique on the format (not so much the art, I like the art, but it takes a while to draw). If the format and panels look nice.
Need to make the best of the critique system. And also if you have any advice on making panels and stuff better.. and placement of word bubbles.


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